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Friday, 22 June 2018

simple,compound and complex sentences

Choose some writing you have done in the last few weeks. Paste it below.


Once upon a time in a farm there were six animals which was a cow,fly and a donkey a rabbit and a bird
I took them on a trip to the zoo  they were having fun and they were feeling so well and happy.
Then suddenly at the zoo a lion was running out of nowhere and the lion was chasing all the animals and got the animals.















Paste it again. We are now going to re-craft it. To improve our writing today we need to have
  • A simple sentence exam
  • A compound sentence
  • 3 descriptive words
  • Capital letters in the right place
  • Full stops in the right place



Once upon a time in a farm there were six groups of  animals which was a cow,fly and a donkey,rabbit and a bird.
I took them on a trip to the zoo they were having fun and they were feeling so proud and happy.
Then suddenly at the zoo a lion was running out of the bush and out the gate then when the lion was chasing all the animals and got the animals to run away.










Wednesday, 23 May 2018

on Monday after lunch room eight went to room 26 to do buddy. my Favourite  thing about buddy is when we can read and teach  the kids. the reason why i love buddy reading is because the people make me happy and proud. why the kids love buddy reading is because they love me.