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Friday, 22 June 2018

simple,compound and complex sentences

Choose some writing you have done in the last few weeks. Paste it below.


Once upon a time in a farm there were six animals which
was a cow,fly and a donkey a rabbit and a bird
I took them on a trip to the zoo  they were having fun
and they were feeling so well and happy.
Then suddenly at the zoo a lion was running out of
nowhere and the lion was chasing all the animals and got
the animals.













Paste it again. We are now going to re-craft it. To improve our writing today we need to have
  • A simple sentence exam
  • A compound sentence
  • 3 descriptive words
  • Capital letters in the right place
  • Full stops in the right place

Once upon a time in a farm there were six groups of  
animals which was a cow,fly and a donkey,rabbit and a
bird.I took them on a trip to the zoo they were having fun
and they were feeling so proud and happy.
Then suddenly at the zoo a lion was running out of the
bush and out the gate then when the lion was chasing all
the animals and got the animals to run away.