don't let go

WALT: write a narrative using dialogue

Task Description: this week for writing we had to write a a narrative about the photo that is below this writing and below the photo is my writing this is how much i have wrote. it was nice writing this narrative. it made me learn more at witting a narrative.

Once upon a time in the dark frosty place at night there were two horses, one duck, a lizard and a pumpkin that was so big. In the dark forest there was a princess named Angel. She was on a horse. It was all good until something happened there was a dark shadow that went past “What's that noise?'' said Angel Quietly. She was scared. Angel Quickly jumped off the horse and went off looking for where the dark shadow went as soon as she got to this big green bush she was so nervous. She heard this weird noise inside the bush so she went to the bush and touched it. “Ouch said Angel that was so sore this bush is so spicky and hard” So Angel went off and the shadow came back Angel saw it and ran off. She was so confused where she was running she went the wrong way so she was lost, and she couldn't find her way to her horse so she cried. She was so sad that she never found her horse.